I just subscribed to the Patreon pack leader status, because I definitely believe in the potential of your visual novel. This is the best one I've seen in a VERY long time. It's got amazing artwork and very interesting lore. I can't wait for more updates!!!
Moontouched is a celebration of furry and monster content. It's alright that it isn't your cup of tea, but please, do be mindful about what you call a waste. Developing this game has brought a lot of joy to an otherwise challenging life for me.
Need to know what kind of drugs did you pump into this cause this is single-handedly the most gorgeous VN I have laid my eyes on. Also wanna add that the story is very compelling so far and the characters introduced feel very fleshed out.
Okay, you can be accused of many things, but modesty is not one of them. The visuals of your VN were a blast from the first second. Awesome, just awesome. Can´t wait to see more.
The only downside I can see is, that it is obviously too ambitious a project to pull off on your own.
Not exactly looking forward to waiting years inbetween updates.
I'm happy to say that help has arrived! A few people have joined the team and everything is on track. It'll be a long road for sure, but exciting things take time!
The storyline is well developed and full of detail and the art is just astounding. I've never seen a VN with such quality till now. This game is truly a gem, I cannot wait for future updates!
Hey！I've played the game and I have to say that every aspect of this game is truly amazing, I'd love for this game to be finished instead of being abandoned halfway through and hopefully see an android version in the future :)
This art is so detailed and the lore is so rich. The self-awareness and consideration to include tooltips instead of having the player access an in-game encyclopedia or to leave them to their own devices once information has already been conveyed is so refreshing! So to speak, I “don’t even go here” (typically), if you understand my meaning, but this work is impressive and I’m glad I checked out the demo. I hope this project and any others you may undertake are appreciated. Thanks for sharing!
Fantastic start! Can't wait to see more. If I can offer some minor feedback, I found the music and sound settings to be a bit too low in volume, despite having them turned all the way up in the options.
Thanks for giving Moontouched a go! Hmm, they're fairly loud on my settings when I crank it up. Could it be you have custom audio mixer values? Either way, I'll look into it!
Reading this VN has fucked up my standards ten times over. I just see that each time I play another one, I would end up comparing it to THIS LIKE-
GOD the Visuals are so beautiful, the worldbuilding is interesting, and each character feels "full" - not one dimensional -. This VN is hands-down my favorite and I am EXTREMELY excited to see how it would play out.
This VN has hands down some of the most gorgeous and intricate visuals I've ever seen. Not only is the artwork of some of the highest quality you can get, but it's also animated in certain parts!? To see such high-level craftsmanship in a VN is a pleasant rarity, but to this extent is something truly special.
The story is also something to behold. It's clear as day that a lot of care and planning went into making the world and characters of Moontouched. Every character feels unique and alive, with not a single character slowing down or dragging the story to any extent. Kirik is easily my favorite, such a good boy.
Even if this is just a short demo, I was blown away with how simply astonishing this VN is. Hats off, 10/10. I'm on the edge of my seat for future releases!
OMG even the Demo is so good and the story is much complex but i like it full of lore, And the expressions for all character i say is very good, and the animation on the end of the demo, hell that was fire and i hope in the future we have that cg animation again that was very cooooool.
Beside that Anoam expression is remind me to william from TSR and somehow for the first time i see him idk he look cool and sweet, i hope this game can go to final chapter and the quality of the game become more good
(srry if my english bad because english is not my main language)
Amazing art and world building. Love all of the facial expressions and body language. The animated cut scene to the VN title at the end is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Absolutely amazing! What a great start! Professional quality and the most beautiful artworks I have ever seen in FVN. (Kirik is so gorgeous!) Best of luck! :D
Dude I have to say, this is one of the most beautifully drawn and written vn i've seen so far, the world building is fantastic and so easy to digest despite being so heavy in lore and information, the way the characters talk and interact with each others is so natural and alive its been a blast to read, and the mc you gave us is just perfect in the way he's not a blank canvas at all, its a breath of fresh air for the usual transparent and "lifeless" mcs I've seen so far, he has depth and character which I just love!
I can't wait to see more of your fantastic work and the lore you have in stock for us, especially when its heavily inspired by celtic lore in terms of customs and spiritualism!
I tought that theory was all about over feminizing men (cuz a delicate man can still look manly and use a GUN) and stuff, relax, we love ourselves and love what we are, men, simply men
sooo, uuuh i don't know how to say this, it's just gorgeous, i think i never seen something so gorgeous on the visual department this is setting new and higher standard jesus christ! also i like the hovering tooltip on "particular words" it makes the reading way smoother and doesnt require you to remember everything at least, the story so far seems interesting i surely see potential but its still too early to tell something else but i'm sure as hell keeping my eye on this.
this is easily the most gorgeous fvn i have every seen and is simply amazing. like, this is already all ive ever wanted in a furry vn. also this is how you do wolves in a fvn!
as soon as i saw the animation style and the backgrounds, i immediately thought of the point and click adventure games i play (that usually end up having hidden object puzzles) like nightmare realm.
and now i have to make a moontouched version of myself XD
This is the fastest I rated a game because I am so sure of what I have experienced. 5/5 stars.
The visuals are the best in any VN I have seen so far! Nothing comes close! An EXCELLENT JOB!!!
The writing is also top notch. It matches the quality of the visuals. I love the exposition! We barely started and I already feel part of that world!
If there is anything to criticize negatively on, it might be the slight overuse of descriptiveness; Lyrically, the extra clause spent describing some things (eg smell of a damp fire) creates a bump in the reading rhythm.
It's not to say you have Purple Prose or poor execution of Thisness, The added descriptions does serve a higher purpose with immersions and shouldn't be cut, but when I compare it to this:
The scene opens to wind whipping flurries of fresh snow in a dark, kinetic, forest, with the first text that reads "When brought to the eroding edge, most cower in awe of its expanse. Brought to their knees by its pinning and left to flee back to the surface, where the hunger is but a whisper".
When I imagine wind, the air as it brushes snow, and sounds of bending and creaking wood, I hear it in the words of the opening scene. Soft plosive sounds and gentle cracking and creaking...
"when brought... cower... knees... pinning... left to flee... back.... surface, where hunger.... whisper" You can see what I mean by the soft plosives resembling the sound of wind, and even creaking wood with the word "pinning" and its long N sound.
I have no idea if it was intentional or not, but I tip my hat to you!
You should use sound and lyrical devices more often, especially when ruining the rhythm to describing certain things with the extra clause. Your writer has the talent for it, I am sure. And even then... You don't have to listen to me. It's still wonderful work regardless of my nitpickiness.
Let's see what else... I've noticed you put some good flaws and are already setting up multiple conflicts already. I'm sure we're ready to see what happens with the monsters, if the MC is ready, but I am very glad Anoam is making a journey to face his fears. I can see how he coddles the MC a bit too much eg lending the MC his own clothes to warm up. Like I said before, your exposition of showing and not telling is remarkable and I am already invested in his growth.
The tooltip regarding lore/worldbuilding is also neat, even if others may think it ruins the exposition. It is better than leaving us confused. It certainly cleared a lot up when meeting the Matriarch and our friend Ki. Please don't remove it or feel the need to add more info, it tells us just enough without ruining the mystery. Thank you for coding it in!!!
Some of the text is too small though, and I have a large monitor... Mind taking another look at that one scene?
Thank you for such a thoughtful review and for the constructive feedback. Most of my writing has been poetry, so adapting to writing novel has been a fun challenge. Thank you for the suggestions, I'll take them to heart! My editor is exceptionally skilled haha If you're referring to the size of the text as the MC describes a specific vine, that was intended to be the text droning out and the MC not really playing close attention to it!
I had a feeling! Poetry is my main calling as well. You're doing everything right, so don't sweat it! (I just realized you're a one-man studio after writing my previous comment. I am so impressed! And a little ashamed to dare criticize? But we only have 1 life, and I am sure none of us want to live with regrets, so I'll speak my mind XD).
There are a lot of guidelines out there to help people write well, some of which are incompatible with each other, so you have to take any and all advice you hear with a grain of salt. I've a foundation with poetry which helps me when I construct my own fiction writing.
I try to score myself on cadence, rhythm, syllable stresses, assonance/consonance, imagery, thisness, subtext, exposition, foreshadowing...etc Some attributes are poetic, some are for a satisfying 2nd reading. If a sentence doesn't help with my story I just rip it out and write something that will. Unfortunately a perfect score is impossible; you have to just deal with lowering the quality of one or more of these attributes to raise the others.
I will show you what I meant in my previous comment about some descriptions.
"I happily chew at the bread, the smoke of the now-doused fire at the heart of our little encampment fluttering between us".
Smoke, now-doused. -- Really great use of assonance. It just glides right off the tongue and is very easy and pleasant to read.
Imagery is really nice, and I think the varied length of the words also add rustic charm.
The rhythm of that sentence is off though, like a palpitating heart. It was the first thing that I could point to and criticize, and it came after quite a while of reading perfection. Try tapping your finger for all the syllables you read and speak the capitalized syllables a little louder, they will be the stressed ones:
"to BE or NOT to BE, that IS the QUESTion"
"I chew on the crust of the bread as the smoke from the doused fire floats in the chill of our quiet camp".
"I CHEW on the CRUST of the BREAD as the SMOKE from the DOUSED FIRE FLOATS in the CHILL of our QUIET CAMP".
Imagery remains, we add a detail about the bread (though it might even be moldy if they've been walking for weeks XD) we get some consonance that also mimics the sound of crunching on a crust of bread. We keep your beautiful assonance while adding a little more to it.
I doubt there is any more we can do to spruce that sentence up. But like I said, we lose some things... All these words are short, no more than 6 letters.... A variety of length can go a long way in keeping things interesting for the eyes and mind. This version is like a lullaby. Pleasant to the ear, but might put the readers to sleep if that's all you give them. And I am sure you already have an eager audience waiting impatiently for the next build... You can't be nitpicky with absolutely everything. So far these out-of-rhythm sentences are few and far between. Otherwise everything is just -MUAH, perfection!!!
I know the smaller font size it was intended, but it is just a little too small. Had to lean in to read it. If we're talking about breaking the 4th wall, this makes us pay more attention rather than less. I think reducing the transparency might be a better option, right? Just a thought.
I wish I had a time machine to see this game in full. This is exactly the set & setting I would love to explore. So carefully crafted.
Sometimes I wonder, had it not been the inquisition, would we still have traditions similar to the world you've shared. yes i just want to wrestle hot dudes under the moon without paying $10k for ayahuasca trip
I would love to be able to snap my fingers and see the project finished up, it would be wild to see. I definitely like to imagine a world with a more unashamed sense of sexuality.
(As response to patreon post) - Patreon is probably your safer bet, it's a true and tested method for FVNs. Kickstarters are mostly used to fund copium like.. indie mmos that never get released. 20y old furries won't fund FVNs they will see in 5 years.. maybe. That's for desperate old school gamers and mmorpgs lol.
I think at best you could attempt to do a small kickstarter to secure funds for the first few months of the development.. Setting a reachable goal like 3000$ maybe.. But that would look bad if it fails so why not do a patreon goal instead? If you reach 1500$ on patreon, you'll.. Do something! Like release this year, idk
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So fwucking cool, the graphics are so so so good, lore just how I like I need more!!!!
I don't see a Mac download
This game has much better lore, graphics, and cutscenes than Genshin Impact...
And I will die on this hill
THIS IS LOWKEY FIRE! HELP!? IM SO EXCITED FOR MORE🙏!!
I just subscribed to the Patreon pack leader status, because I definitely believe in the potential of your visual novel. This is the best one I've seen in a VERY long time. It's got amazing artwork and very interesting lore. I can't wait for more updates!!!
Dang... this is the most beautiful VN i never see. Sadly for now is just a demo but i will love to see more in the future
Such a good game wasted on furry content
Moontouched is a celebration of furry and monster content. It's alright that it isn't your cup of tea, but please, do be mindful about what you call a waste. Developing this game has brought a lot of joy to an otherwise challenging life for me.
I liked this game. I hope and look forward to the development of this project
Thanks Ko, I look forward to sharing more!
This has to be the best developed demo I've ever seen, art and story lore is incredible
Thanks friend, I'm glad you're enjoying the lore!
Love this VN so far! Can't wait to see more!
More on the way!
Could you please allow us to increase font size and/or change font style? I love the game and the great work, but I am having difficulty to read.
We'll look into it for the release of Chapter One!
Thanks :)
Is 0.2.0 just the addition of the Android and Linux builds, or were there changes made to the Windows build as well?
The Windows version is now optimized at roughly 1/3rd the size of the original upload! Apart from that it's the same demo!
Need to know what kind of drugs did you pump into this cause this is single-handedly the most gorgeous VN I have laid my eyes on. Also wanna add that the story is very compelling so far and the characters introduced feel very fleshed out.
I genuinely cannot wait to see more of this.
Thanks for the kinds words Ozzie! So glad you enjoyed it
Will there be an android build in the future?
I would love that ^_^
Just released an Android build right now!
Okay, you can be accused of many things, but modesty is not one of them. The visuals of your VN were a blast from the first second. Awesome, just awesome. Can´t wait to see more.
The only downside I can see is, that it is obviously too ambitious a project to pull off on your own.
Not exactly looking forward to waiting years inbetween updates.
I'm happy to say that help has arrived! A few people have joined the team and everything is on track. It'll be a long road for sure, but exciting things take time!
The storyline is well developed and full of detail and the art is just astounding. I've never seen a VN with such quality till now. This game is truly a gem, I cannot wait for future updates!
Thanks friend, I'm looking forward to the next update as well
Hey！I've played the game and I have to say that every aspect of this game is truly amazing, I'd love for this game to be finished instead of being abandoned halfway through and hopefully see an android version in the future :)
I won't be abandoning it, no worries there. Moontouched means a lot to me!
Glad to hear it, I will support you on patreon :)
This art is so detailed and the lore is so rich. The self-awareness and consideration to include tooltips instead of having the player access an in-game encyclopedia or to leave them to their own devices once information has already been conveyed is so refreshing! So to speak, I “don’t even go here” (typically), if you understand my meaning, but this work is impressive and I’m glad I checked out the demo. I hope this project and any others you may undertake are appreciated. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for such a kind review, I'm honored that you took the chance on Moontouched even if it's not your normal flavor of tea :)
Have you considered supporting more languages for this game? Such as Chinese.
I have, still in consideration!
Fantastic start! Can't wait to see more. If I can offer some minor feedback, I found the music and sound settings to be a bit too low in volume, despite having them turned all the way up in the options.
Thanks for giving Moontouched a go! Hmm, they're fairly loud on my settings when I crank it up. Could it be you have custom audio mixer values? Either way, I'll look into it!
You know what, my audio mixer was exactly what was causing the problem. Sorry for the confusion!
No problem at all! Glad it got resolved for ya
will it be released for linux? i'd like to play this on my steam deck hehe
Linux builds are in playtesting right now
okay, thank you!
Reading this VN has fucked up my standards ten times over. I just see that each time I play another one, I would end up comparing it to THIS LIKE-
GOD the Visuals are so beautiful, the worldbuilding is interesting, and each character feels "full" - not one dimensional -. This VN is hands-down my favorite and I am EXTREMELY excited to see how it would play out.
Haha makes me happy to hear you enjoyed the art and story so far. Much more to come
Oh my god. Where to begin???
This VN has hands down some of the most gorgeous and intricate visuals I've ever seen. Not only is the artwork of some of the highest quality you can get, but it's also animated in certain parts!? To see such high-level craftsmanship in a VN is a pleasant rarity, but to this extent is something truly special.
The story is also something to behold. It's clear as day that a lot of care and planning went into making the world and characters of Moontouched. Every character feels unique and alive, with not a single character slowing down or dragging the story to any extent. Kirik is easily my favorite, such a good boy.
Even if this is just a short demo, I was blown away with how simply astonishing this VN is. Hats off, 10/10. I'm on the edge of my seat for future releases!
Thank you for the review horchata! Kirik is indeed a good boy :)
If i'm gonna read another VN that is not as good as this, i'm not interested lol
doh, they've all got their strengths and charms!
Will there be an Android or IOs version? Just curious because I don't currently have a windows or MacOS😭 pls do make one of those if you can :)))
ios has a good renpy emulator called “spark”. Android has bunch of those too, probably.
Workin on an Android build now!
OMG I'm so excited tysm, best author ever>33
Dude I was looking for vns to read that I haven't already and the way I screamed when I saw this, I appreciate you sm author ❤️
hah I appreciate you too reader, thanks for giving it a go!
OMG even the Demo is so good and the story is much complex but i like it full of lore, And the expressions for all character i say is very good, and the animation on the end of the demo, hell that was fire and i hope in the future we have that cg animation again that was very cooooool.
Beside that Anoam expression is remind me to william from TSR and somehow for the first time i see him idk he look cool and sweet, i hope this game can go to final chapter and the quality of the game become more good
(srry if my english bad because english is not my main language)
Happy to hear that you enjoyed Anoam, he's a special one
Amazing art and world building. Love all of the facial expressions and body language. The animated cut scene to the VN title at the end is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Yesss, those animated scenes are a lot of fun to do, expect more of them!
Absolutely amazing! What a great start! Professional quality and the most beautiful artworks I have ever seen in FVN. (Kirik is so gorgeous!) Best of luck! :D
Kirik is indeed a pretty lad, glad you think so too!
God this is absolutely increible, I'm SO excited for more of this to be released! Keep up the incredible work <3
Thanks! I'm keepin' at it
Dude I have to say, this is one of the most beautifully drawn and written vn i've seen so far, the world building is fantastic and so easy to digest despite being so heavy in lore and information, the way the characters talk and interact with each others is so natural and alive its been a blast to read, and the mc you gave us is just perfect in the way he's not a blank canvas at all, its a breath of fresh air for the usual transparent and "lifeless" mcs I've seen so far, he has depth and character which I just love!
I can't wait to see more of your fantastic work and the lore you have in stock for us, especially when its heavily inspired by celtic lore in terms of customs and spiritualism!
Thank you for the review Iraelo! I'm glad you enjoy how the game is shaping up so far. I'm really excited to share more
MC looks ugly af. Who will want to play as this neckbeard?
The MC looks fine to me.
For all of us !!
Ya all just brainwashed by the woke mind virus that states ugly is beautiful now. Not surprised.
why are you getting so worked up? so strange it almost feels like bait
You've revealed the secret agenda of this whole project, well done sir
We need an android version of this beautiful game to further spread the agenda :3
I'm not woke and I think the MC looks ok. Not all gay people are femboys. Some, unfortunately, even look like you. I meant on the inside...
How being manly and ugly is woke?
I tought that theory was all about over feminizing men (cuz a delicate man can still look manly and use a GUN) and stuff, relax, we love ourselves and love what we are, men, simply men
MC look good, make me wonder how he looks like when he shift
me I wanna play as this neckbeard.
Thou has bad taste
He sexy AF, wTFdym?
He's okay honestly. I'm crazy about him, but he looks good enough. Muscular, masculine, it fits. Makes more sense than some overly gay twink type.
Only human character that threw me off so far was Amia, but hey, at least she's not the MC.
Amazing demo
Thanks RK!
sooo, uuuh i don't know how to say this, it's just gorgeous, i think i never seen something so gorgeous on the visual department this is setting new and higher standard jesus christ! also i like the hovering tooltip on "particular words" it makes the reading way smoother and doesnt require you to remember everything at least, the story so far seems interesting i surely see potential but its still too early to tell something else but i'm sure as hell keeping my eye on this.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Folvin, I'm glad you enjoy the tooltip feature!
love all the hunk dudes :p ;)
lorge
this is easily the most gorgeous fvn i have every seen and is simply amazing. like, this is already all ive ever wanted in a furry vn. also this is how you do wolves in a fvn!
as soon as i saw the animation style and the backgrounds, i immediately thought of the point and click adventure games i play (that usually end up having hidden object puzzles) like nightmare realm.
and now i have to make a moontouched version of myself XD
High praise! Thank you for giving the demo a go and sharing your thoughts. I'd love to see your Moontouched lad when you get around to it!
Android version?
In the works!
The Android build just released!
This is the fastest I rated a game because I am so sure of what I have experienced. 5/5 stars.
The visuals are the best in any VN I have seen so far! Nothing comes close! An EXCELLENT JOB!!!
The writing is also top notch. It matches the quality of the visuals. I love the exposition! We barely started and I already feel part of that world!
If there is anything to criticize negatively on, it might be the slight overuse of descriptiveness; Lyrically, the extra clause spent describing some things (eg smell of a damp fire) creates a bump in the reading rhythm.
It's not to say you have Purple Prose or poor execution of Thisness, The added descriptions does serve a higher purpose with immersions and shouldn't be cut, but when I compare it to this:
The scene opens to wind whipping flurries of fresh snow in a dark, kinetic, forest, with the first text that reads "When brought to the eroding edge, most cower in awe of its expanse. Brought to their knees by its pinning and left to flee back to the surface, where the hunger is but a whisper".
When I imagine wind, the air as it brushes snow, and sounds of bending and creaking wood, I hear it in the words of the opening scene. Soft plosive sounds and gentle cracking and creaking...
"when brought... cower... knees... pinning... left to flee... back.... surface, where hunger.... whisper" You can see what I mean by the soft plosives resembling the sound of wind, and even creaking wood with the word "pinning" and its long N sound.
I have no idea if it was intentional or not, but I tip my hat to you!
You should use sound and lyrical devices more often, especially when ruining the rhythm to describing certain things with the extra clause. Your writer has the talent for it, I am sure. And even then... You don't have to listen to me. It's still wonderful work regardless of my nitpickiness.
Let's see what else... I've noticed you put some good flaws and are already setting up multiple conflicts already. I'm sure we're ready to see what happens with the monsters, if the MC is ready, but I am very glad Anoam is making a journey to face his fears. I can see how he coddles the MC a bit too much eg lending the MC his own clothes to warm up. Like I said before, your exposition of showing and not telling is remarkable and I am already invested in his growth.
The tooltip regarding lore/worldbuilding is also neat, even if others may think it ruins the exposition. It is better than leaving us confused. It certainly cleared a lot up when meeting the Matriarch and our friend Ki. Please don't remove it or feel the need to add more info, it tells us just enough without ruining the mystery. Thank you for coding it in!!!
Some of the text is too small though, and I have a large monitor... Mind taking another look at that one scene?
Thank you for such a thoughtful review and for the constructive feedback. Most of my writing has been poetry, so adapting to writing novel has been a fun challenge. Thank you for the suggestions, I'll take them to heart! My editor is exceptionally skilled haha
If you're referring to the size of the text as the MC describes a specific vine, that was intended to be the text droning out and the MC not really playing close attention to it!
I had a feeling! Poetry is my main calling as well. You're doing everything right, so don't sweat it! (I just realized you're a one-man studio after writing my previous comment. I am so impressed! And a little ashamed to dare criticize? But we only have 1 life, and I am sure none of us want to live with regrets, so I'll speak my mind XD).
There are a lot of guidelines out there to help people write well, some of which are incompatible with each other, so you have to take any and all advice you hear with a grain of salt. I've a foundation with poetry which helps me when I construct my own fiction writing.
I try to score myself on cadence, rhythm, syllable stresses, assonance/consonance, imagery, thisness, subtext, exposition, foreshadowing...etc Some attributes are poetic, some are for a satisfying 2nd reading. If a sentence doesn't help with my story I just rip it out and write something that will. Unfortunately a perfect score is impossible; you have to just deal with lowering the quality of one or more of these attributes to raise the others.
I will show you what I meant in my previous comment about some descriptions.
"I happily chew at the bread, the smoke of the now-doused fire at the heart of our little encampment fluttering between us".
Smoke, now-doused. -- Really great use of assonance. It just glides right off the tongue and is very easy and pleasant to read.
Imagery is really nice, and I think the varied length of the words also add rustic charm.
The rhythm of that sentence is off though, like a palpitating heart. It was the first thing that I could point to and criticize, and it came after quite a while of reading perfection. Try tapping your finger for all the syllables you read and speak the capitalized syllables a little louder, they will be the stressed ones:
"to BE or NOT to BE, that IS the QUESTion"
"I chew on the crust of the bread as the smoke from the doused fire floats in the chill of our quiet camp".
"I CHEW on the CRUST of the BREAD as the SMOKE from the DOUSED FIRE FLOATS in the CHILL of our QUIET CAMP".
Imagery remains, we add a detail about the bread (though it might even be moldy if they've been walking for weeks XD) we get some consonance that also mimics the sound of crunching on a crust of bread. We keep your beautiful assonance while adding a little more to it.
I doubt there is any more we can do to spruce that sentence up. But like I said, we lose some things... All these words are short, no more than 6 letters.... A variety of length can go a long way in keeping things interesting for the eyes and mind. This version is like a lullaby. Pleasant to the ear, but might put the readers to sleep if that's all you give them. And I am sure you already have an eager audience waiting impatiently for the next build... You can't be nitpicky with absolutely everything. So far these out-of-rhythm sentences are few and far between. Otherwise everything is just -MUAH, perfection!!!
I know the smaller font size it was intended, but it is just a little too small. Had to lean in to read it. If we're talking about breaking the 4th wall, this makes us pay more attention rather than less. I think reducing the transparency might be a better option, right? Just a thought.
I wish I had a time machine to see this game in full.
This is exactly the set & setting I would love to explore.
So carefully crafted.
Sometimes I wonder, had it not been the inquisition, would we still have traditions similar to the world you've shared.
yes i just want to wrestle hot dudes under the moon without paying $10k for ayahuasca tripI would love to be able to snap my fingers and see the project finished up, it would be wild to see. I definitely like to imagine a world with a more unashamed sense of sexuality.
(As response to patreon post) - Patreon is probably your safer bet, it's a true and tested method for FVNs. Kickstarters are mostly used to fund copium like.. indie mmos that never get released. 20y old furries won't fund FVNs they will see in 5 years.. maybe. That's for desperate old school gamers and mmorpgs lol.
I think at best you could attempt to do a small kickstarter to secure funds for the first few months of the development.. Setting a reachable goal like 3000$ maybe.. But that would look bad if it fails so why not do a patreon goal instead? If you reach 1500$ on patreon, you'll.. Do something! Like release this year, idk
Thank you for your feedback on this! I've decided to stick to the tried and true Patreon model!